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Wow, this was such a moving and well written story! Normally I'm quite sceptical about mpreg but you managed to keep the characters in-character, especially Bones. It was a real nice read. Thank you for writing this story!
Great story. Great plot; loved what you did with the characters.
A Vulcan shadow does have an interesting ring to it.
Death threats, an interested Spock! What's next? does McCoy have twins who are illogicly half Vulcan and a quarter Adordian? Love the story still so far and look forward to the next chapter
Yet another predicament for McCoy. Nice build up.
They totally do weasel.
Huh so they didn't even wipe the crews mind correctly. Pity
Still good and getting better. Go McCoy!
Huh. Almost as humorous as the last chapter. I enjoy the way McCoy is progressing though this condition and through the story itself.
Ha. Well that's lovely. Wonderful characterizations, wonderful work. Look forward to chapter 8
Well....that explains a lot. Huh. Hilarious.
Now this was a fun chapter. Smooth dialoge, transitions, everyone kept in character. This is getting good.
To chapter 6!
What a queer illness. Good thing McCoy isn't a heavy drinker or withdraw would be almost intolerable. Characters are in check and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
chapter 5 here I go
Huh. Different. Nice Jim by the way. I also like the ripple effect.
Ah McCoy..it is difficult to have relationship needs being met. Well, hope for the future.
Characters are still recognizable and story flow is smooth. I look forward to chapter 3
You painted a nice start to this piece. Nice descriptons and Everyone is in character and I adore the Abrbonians. I wonder what mischief they'll start up next. Now on to chapter 2~